ToxicDon's Reviews

[Gildedguy vs Bog]

My only critique is that the beginning buildup could have been more,...hmm.... whats the word? "to build up the suspense" before thrilling us. like in mockingjay 2, right before the white lizard mutations show up.

[Pmation: "Twin Geeks"]

This is a series of animated cliches, I did not laugh once, not because it wasn't funny, but because I have seen EVERY bit in this video several times before.

Also, the girl hit the guy with her right hand, but he has a left-hand print on his RIGHT cheek.

[Dovahbear 4]

this is like, "if captain America was a bear".

[Internet IRL Entry - Real Twitter Bird]

birds have feathers, not fur.
the feet just stick out, there are no muscles,
the wings should have the feathers running down the body,
could have more shadows and highlights.

I feel if u used more references, you would progress rapidly.

[See you see me, begin]

...maybe finish it?

[INTERNET IRL WorldWideWeb Park]

This is an idea I see a lot of people doing. All the social media accounts just chilling out together, but it doesn't really say a lot about them interacting together.